Jayfeather Work In Progress

Vision - Well done!!! Very good sketch considering you did this in your math class.. my match class doodles suck XD Good job!

Originality - Eh, not the most original of pictures so I'm sorry but you only get a 3 star originality <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="380" title=" (Sad)"/> Although, you have feathers or something on his ear which I hardly ever see so that's good.

Technique - Gawd, you know I love your technique!!! I especially love it in this picture though, very realistic and his markings look so cool. Awesome job.

Impact - Overall?! GEEZ, can't you just ready the critique and look at the ratings?! I love this picture and it has a great impact!!